Steve McKinnon,
Your blog entry on “Pet Sounds” by The Beach Boys was done quite well. All your facts are correct according to your references, and I am glad to see you actually do enjoy this type of music. It's amazing to see how a 23 year old Californian like Brian Wilson can do such ground breaking work during a time period where rock n' roll was thriving for something new. Unfortunately, your blog seems to have some grammar issues, like run-on sentences and improper punctuation (I understand this is not an English course, but I thought you would just like to know). Good luck on your up and coming assignments and make sure never to lose that "never-settle" mentality.
-Phil Jahnke
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